Paste a rough idea or weak hook. Get a weakness diagnosis and three AI rewrites — each using a different angle — ready to score in the analyzer.
Score the winning rewrite in the analyzer.
The AI identifies which signal is weakest — clarity, stakes, specificity or curiosity — then rewrites using three distinct mechanisms.
“This changed everything”
“I changed one line in my Shorts intro and retention jumped in 48 hours”
“You need to know this”
“Most new creators lose viewers because their first sentence has no payoff”
“Here is my advice”
“Stop writing hooks before you know the viewer's exact fear”
“This changed everything”
“I changed one line in my Shorts intro and retention jumped in 48 hours”
“You need to know this”
“Most new creators lose viewers because their first sentence has no payoff”
“Here is my advice”
“Stop writing hooks before you know the viewer's exact fear”
Most weak hooks aren't wrong — they're vague, slow or low-stakes. The Hook Improver diagnoses which one, then rewrites your line three ways: more specific, higher stakes, and with an open loop. Here's what each rewrite is doing, so you can pick one — or write your own.
"Tips", "things" and "stuff" give the viewer nothing to picture. Name the object, the number you really have, or the exact situation.
Here are some tips to make your videos better.
Cut the first two seconds of every clip — that's where most Shorts feel slow.
Viewers stay when there's something to lose. Name the wasted time, money or effort — only the stakes that are true for your topic.
Let's talk about choosing a microphone.
Buy the wrong mic first and you'll re-record every video you make this year.
Open one concrete question and don't answer it in the first line. The loop should close at the payoff, not in the next sentence.
I'm going to show you how I edit.
There's one setting I turn on before I edit anything — and it's not the one you'd guess.
A rewrite that doesn't sound like you won't perform like you. Treat the rewrites as structure: keep the mechanism, swap in your own words and your own proof.
Paste a rewrite word-for-word even though you'd never say it.
Keep the stakes angle, reword it the way you talk, re-score it.
Rewrites are illustrative examples, not measured results.
It diagnoses why a hook is weak, then returns three rewrites of the same idea — one more specific, one with higher stakes, one with an open loop — each with a note on what changed.
No. The Analyzer scores a hook and explains the scores; the Improver focuses on rewriting it. Many creators improve a line here, then score it in the Analyzer.
Check every rewrite before you use it: keep only numbers and claims that are true for your video.
Yes. Specificity, stakes and open loops work on any platform where the first line decides whether people stay.